Today in cybersmart we had  to find a average comment that had information but not to the standard,then copy it then rewrite it to make it a better comment with more punctuation,CAPITAL LETTERS and spelling correctly. Here is my rewirted comment.

Today in cybersmart we were learning about a decent detailed blog comment. Here is some blog features that should be in a decent  blog comment please have a look at our ideas.

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Learning After & Before

Today during cyber smart we were reflecting on our after and before Then we had to pick a post then improve the description using more information to our old post.

Camp Muriwai Beach

This term two week four 2016 W.P.S Went on a wet, muddy ,fun Bush camp.Camp was only for year five and six's.We went on a 4 hour bush walk up and down mountains.We even had a performing night where you share a item of yours.  This was my favourite thing because I got to sleep with my friends.

My blog treaty!

 Hi! today in Cybersmart we came up with some things that we think blogs are for like, showing and sharing our learning. We have used the term I will ensure, which means I will make sure.

Welcome

Welcome to my learning blog.